Here goes
Everyday I try to smile,
I´m pretending, that everything´s alright,
but It hurts inside... so bad, so bad
And I´m struggling... ...in pain,
and I´m not far away from dying...
I think I´m lost again,
lost in the crowd,
These two lines could be combined "I'm lost in the crowd"
everything ´s up so loud,
everything is kinda generic...you were talking about a crowd before, are the voices from the crowd too loud or is it something else?
I´m standing there,
what am I supposed to say... I´m...
I´m a broken Soul inside this broken world,
tryin´ to find the meaning of life,
still hoping in the end,
everything´s gonna be alright
Is this part the chorus if it's a song?
Needs a transition here. "But there's nothing left at all" ?
there´s nothing left at all...
I´m trying to find something to hold on...
there´s nothing left at all...
I´m alone out there...
within me, there´s a big black hole,
it´s absorbing everything,
everything that would be enough,
Again, everything is a bit generic, so if it's inside you there are only a few things that could exist there beyond your physicality (I'm assuming you don't mean the part about the black hole literally) And IMO there are only three things that can give you hope, memories, thoughts and emotions...
to give a little hope and now...
theres nothing left at all...
(if you take my change about the transition, you'd need to drop "and now" and then include "but")
