a new experience

GaggedBoy

Gläubiger
hoi
ich hab mal angefangen für DeviantArt ne Yaoi Geschichte auf Englisch zu schreiben
das ist mein erster Versuch in Sachen Yaoi und zudem noch auf Englisch
daher wollte ich mal meine bisherigen Ergebnisse on stellen
wenn jemand also nen Fehler findet, Vorschläge hat oder einfach nett kommentieren möchte ran an die Tasten
zur Warnung, diese Story enthält neben Yaoi auch Bondage am unwilligen Objekt
so, wen das nicht abschreckt, viel Spaß



The last beams of sunlight faded as the sun disappeared behind the majestetic trees of the Kurell Wood. Prince Liam was late and he cursed himself for beeing so careless. He had been dreaming about Nasira instead of hurrying to arrive at her castle.
And now he had to follow the old street in the darkness. Angrily he ran his hand through his long, red hair and then pulled his cloak around him.
When the sun had dissappeared it became immediatly cold. Liam´s green eyes were fixed to the ground, he feared to stumble in the dark, when he heard a noise from his right side. The young prince froze. There had been rumors about bandits the last days, but Liam didn´t believe that any outlaw would come this close to the capital city. Now he wasn´t sure anymore.
For severeral moments the prince just waited, one hand on his sword. Nothing happened and the only thing he heard was the wood itself.
Just as he calmed andtokk the hand from the sword someone clamped a hand over Liam´s mouth from behind while another had grabbed his right arm.
“Mpfff.”
Was all that escaped under the gagging hand. Liam struggled and tried to free his hand, but a second after the attack another person entered the fight. Liam saw a dark figure jumping in front of him. For a second he could see a slim body, clad in black leather and long blond hair. Then the new one raised his hand and Liam focused on the cloth he was holding.
The hand on Liam´s mouth left to grab his other arm and the other attacker immediatly pressed the cloth in Liam´s face.
A strange smell invaded the young mans senses and he coughed. Now Liam panically struggled to get that cloth away, but his attackers had him sandwiched between them and their bodies pressed against him. Liam tried to hold his breath, but the short fight had already weakended him and soon he had to breath. Liam felt strange, as that vapour entered his lungs. His head was suddenly empty and the prince felt dizzy and tired. His resistance weakened and his next breath was already easier. The more of that stuff he breathed in the less it burned.
Suddenly Liam realized, that he had stopped struggling, his confused mind tried to remember what was going on. He felt soo tired.
A hand stroked his hair, for a second Liam focused and found himself lying in his attackers arms. Then everything went dark.

Kiaro pressed the cloth firmly against the boy´s face. His friend Nish held theit captive tight and save as he closed his eyes and went limp in Nish´s arms. Kiaro removed the cloth and looked at their newest victim. The boy seemed to be around twenty years old, his hair was red and his green eyes werde closed. His face was beautiful and remided Kiaro of paintings he had seen in some noblemans castle. At the moment this aristocratic face was ruled by an expression of peaceful sleep, the mouth opened a bit, inviting to kiss him.
Kiaro gently stroked the boy´s red hair. It felt soft like silk. The boy opened his eyes for a second and looked around with a confused look, bevor falling asleep again.
“Give him another dose.”
Nish demanded. Kiaro nodded and took the bottle with sleeping milk, without taking his eyes of the boy. While he soaked the cloth with more sleeping milk Nish had a closer look at theit prey.
“Looks like a good catch. A good filled purse and look here. Finest silk.”
Kiaro nodded and tied the soaked cloth over the boy´s face, knotting it behind his head. He wasn´t really interested in their captive´s wealth at the moment.
“Now the hands.”
Said Nish and they tied the boy´s hands with leather straps, then his legs. Kiaro made sure, that the bonds weren´t too tight so they wouldn´t cut off the blood circulation.
“Ok, I think you want to carry him?”
Nish asked with a smile. Kiaro´s cheeks turned red. Nish always knew what was on his mind.
“Yes, I´d appreciate that.”
Kiaro said and put one hand under the tied boy´s legs, the other under his back and liftet him up. Kiaro couldn´t help but he had a big bulge in his pants. Nish gently placed a kiss on Kiaro´s lips.
“This is gonna be fun.”
He said with a grin.

Liam felt strange.
He couldn´t move and his head seemed to be filled with cotton. When he opened his eyes he found himself lying on the ground. Above him he could see cloth, lighted by a fire outside. But no walls and he could see grass on the ground. Slowly he realized that he was lying in a tent. The ground under him was soft and he was covered by a blanket. His head rested on a pillow. Liam wanted to call for help, but only some muffled sounds came out. A cloth was wrapped around his mouth, gagging him. Liam struggled a bit and managed to get the blanket off. His hands were tied together in front of him and he was naked from above his waist.
Then he remembered being attacked. He had been kidnapped and now he was lying tied and gagged in a tent somewhere in the wood, completely at his captors mercy.
Liam cried into his gag and struggled in vain. His whole life he had been in control of the world sourrounding him. He was the heir of the kingdom and only the queen, his mother, had more authority than him.
And now he felt helpless like he had never before in his life. Fear and panic spread in his mind.
Liam started to scream and struggled like a madman to get this bonds of. The leather straps bit in his flesh and blood turned the blanket red.
Liam hardly realized his captors jumping in the tent, his mind was completely captured in his own little world of fear. They grabbed his arms and tried to prevent further wounds, someone spoke, but Liam didn´t hear anything.
A cloth was clamped over his face and the strange smell dragged him back to reality. The blonde kidnapper was sitting on Liam´s chest and pressed the cloth on his face.
In this moment Liam realized something, that hit him like a punch. He could see the blond´s ears. He was an elf. Liam stared at the young face with piercing blue eyes. He had never before seen an elf, but he remembered that thing about their ears and their strength. They were slim and tall, but they had easily overpowered Liam.
His own strength faded and Liam closed his eyes. He felt how they untied his hands.
Then nothing for a while.

Nish had used a healing spell on the boy´s hands. Kiaro and Nish were just busy with a meal when they heard the noises from their tent. Kiaro felt bad because of this. He had seen the fear in the boy´s eyes. He looked at Nish who was busy whiping the last rests of blood away.
“We´ll have to retie him.”
Nish nodded.
”I´ll wrap some scarfes around his wrists.” Nish answered and left. Kiaro looked down at his captive. He wondered who he was and what would happen when he wakes up.
Kiaro climbed off the boy and laid next to him, watching his face. He looked to damn sexy. Kiaro put the gag down and placed a kiss on the boy´s lips.
“So soft.”
He said to himself and kissed him again, now forcing his tongue into his captive´s mouth, while he ran his hands through the silky red hair. When he finished the kiss Kiaro couldn´t control himself. He opened his leather pants, pulled down his underwear and laid on top of the sleeping beauty. The silk of their captive´s pants felt so great on his hard manhood. Kiaro started rubbing himself against the boy. Kiaro kissed the boy again and then he climbed a bit up and dig his face in that silky hair, enjoying the nice scent and his throbbing manhood rubbing over the boy´s smooth skin.
Kiaro moaned and closed his eyes, then he came with a scream.
Sinking back on the blankets Kiaro kissed the boy once more, this time very gentle.
“Look was mess you made.”
Kiaro almost jumped when he heard Nish´s voice. His face turned red as he faced his friend.
“Oh ehm I...”
he started, but then he saw that hungry look in Nish´s violet eyes.
“Shut up!”
was all Nish said when he pushed Kiaro down on the blanket. Kiaro grasped for air, when he suddenly felt a tongue on his cock.

Nish gently ran his tongue over his friend´s manhood, liking every remaining drop of his cum into his hungry mouth. After he finished cleaning Kiaro he wrapped his lips aorund the already hardening cock and sucked him back into full erection. While this he guided Kiaro´s hand to his leather crotch and let the blonde gibe a litte back of what he recived. Nish enjoyed Kiaro´s moans of pleasure as he brought him to the edge of climax, then he simply let him go.
„That´s for raping our captive...without me.“
Nish said and now turned to the still sleeping boy and continued his licking on the boys well toned chest, removing every evidence of Kiaro´s little game.
While this Kiaro stuffed his erection back into his pants, he would get a chance later. Now he also focused on their slowly waking captive. He sat back on the boy´s chest and ran his hands through his hair and over his face. The boy groaned as Nish started to run his hands over his pants. After some seconds of massaging the captive´s crotch a large bulge formed under the silk.
Kiaro carefully placed his own bulge on the boy´s face, gently rubbing it on him. As the boy groaned again he was gagged by a leather clad crotch. Kiaro enjoyed some unwilling ball licking by his captive, while Nish continued to caress the boy´s cock through his pants.
Kiaro moaned as the boy´s tongue probed that thing between his lips, the trying to push it out.
The boy opened his sexy green eyes and looked up to Kiaro, then down to what he was licking.
 

7andwin

Novize
The last beams of sunlight faded as the sun disappeared behind the majestetic trees of the Kurell Wood. Prince Liam was late and he cursed himself for beeing (being) so careless. He had been dreaming (had dreamt) about Nasira instead of hurrying to [arrive at] her castle.
And now he had to follow the old street in (into) the darkness. Angrily he ran his hand through his long, red hair and then pulled his cloak around him (covered himself with his cloak).
When the sun had dissappeared, it became immediately cold. Liam´s green eyes were fixed to (fixated on) the ground, he feared to stumble in the dark, when he heard a noise from his right side. The young prince froze. There had been rumors about bandits the last (latest oder recent) days, but Liam didn´t believe that any outlaw would come this (so)close to the capital city. Now he wasn´t sure anymore.
For severeral moments the prince just waited, one hand on his sword. Nothing happened and the only thing he heard was the wood itself.
Just as he calmed andtokk (had taken) the hand from the sword someone clamped a hand over Liam´s mouth from behind while another (one) had grabbed his right arm.
“Mpfff.”
Was all that escaped under the gagging hand (,was the only sound he could make through the tight squeeze of his hand) . Liam struggled and tried to free his hand, but a second after the attack , another person entered the fight. Liam saw a dark figure jumping in front of at him. For a second, he could see a slim body, clad in black leather and long blond hair. Then the new one raised his hand and Liam focused on the cloth he was holding (meinst du wearing ?).
The hand on Liam´s mouth left (was taken away) to grab his other arm and the other attacker immediately pressed the cloth in Liam´s face.
A strange smell invaded (hört sich seltsam an, weiß nicht ob das geht) the young mans senses and he coughed. Now Liam panically struggled to get that cloth away, but his attackers had him (had sandwiched him) sandwiched between them and their bodies pressed against him. Liam tried to hold his breath, but the short fight had already weakended him and soon he had to breath. Liam felt strange, as that vapour entered his lungs. His head was suddenly empty and the prince felt dizzy and tired. His resistance weakened and his next breath was already easier. The more of that stuff he breathed in (The more he inhaled that stuff), the less it burned.
Suddenly Liam realized, that he had stopped struggling, his confused mind tried to remember what was going on. He felt soo tired.
A hand stroked his hair, ( ; ) for a second Liam focused and found himself lying in his attacker's arms. Then everything went dark.

Kiaro pressed the cloth firmly against the boy´s face. His friend Nish held their captive tight and save as he closed his eyes and went (besser:got) limp in Nish´s arms. Kiaro removed the cloth and looked at their newest victim. The boy seemed to be around twenty years old, (.) His hair was red and his green eyes werde closed. His face was beautiful and reminded Kiaro of paintings he had seen in some nobleman's castle. At the moment this aristocratic face was ruled (dominated) by an expression of peaceful sleep, the mouth opened a bit, inviting to kiss him.
Kiaro gently stroked the boy´s red hair. It felt soft like silk. The boy opened his eyes for a second and looked around with a confused ("confused" hattest du schon öfters, deswegen vielleicht besser: puzzled) look, before falling asleep again.
“Give him another dose.”,
Nish demanded. Kiaro nodded and took the bottle with sleeping milk, without taking his eyes of the boy. While he soaked (soaking) the cloth with more sleeping milk, Nish had a closer look at their prey.
“Looks like a good catch. A good filled purse and look here: Finest silk.”
Kiaro nodded and tied the soaked cloth over the boy´s face, knotting it behind his head. He wasn´t really interested in their captive´s wealth at the moment.
“Now the hands.”,
said Nish and they tied the boy´s hands with leather straps, then his legs. Kiaro made sure, that the bonds weren´t too tight so they wouldn´t cut off the blood circulation.
“Ok, I think, you want to carry him?”,
Nish asked with a smile. Kiaro´s cheeks turned red. Nish always knew what was on his mind (the was thinking about).
“Yes, I´d appreciate that.”,
Kiaro said and put one hand under the tied boy´s legs, the other oneunder his back and lifted him up. Kiaro couldn´t help but he had got a big bulge in his pants. Nish gently placed a kiss on Kiaro´s lips.
“This is gonna be fun.”,
he said with a grin.

Liam felt strange.
He couldn´t move and his head seemed to be filled with cotton. When he opened his eyes, he found himself lying on the ground. Above him, he could see cloth, lighted by a fire outside. But there were no walls and he could see grass on the ground. Slowly he realized that he was lying in a tent. The ground under beneath him was soft and he was covered by a blanket. His head rested on a pillow. Liam wanted to call for help, but only some muffled sounds came out. A cloth was wrapped around his mouth, gagging him. Liam struggled a bit and managed to get the blanket off. His hands were tied together in front of him and he was naked from above his waist.
Then he remembered being (that he had been) attacked. He had been kidnapped and now he was lying tied and gagged in a tent somewhere in the woods, completely at (dependent on) his captor's mercy.
Liam cried into his gag and struggled in vain. His whole life, he had been in control of the world sourrounding him. He was the heir of the kingdom and only the queen, his mother, had more authority than him.
And now he felt as helpless like he had never before in his life. Fear and panic spread in his mind.
Liam started to scream and struggled like a madman (ich würd eher maniac sagen) to get this bonds of. The leather straps bit in his flesh and blood turned the blanket red.
Liam hardly realized his captors jumping in (jumped into) the tent, his mind was completely captured in his own little world of fear. They grabbed his arms and tried to prevent further wounds; someone spoke, but Liam didn´t hear anything.
A cloth was clamped over his face and the strange smell dragged him back to reality. The blonde kidnapper was sitting on Liam´s chest and pressed the cloth on his face.
In this moment Liam realized something, that hit him like a punch. He could see the blonde´s ears: He was an elf. Liam stared at the young face with piercing blue eyes. He had never before seen an elf (before), but he remembered that thing about their ears and their strength. They were slim and tall, but they had easily overpowered Liam.
His own strength faded and Liam closed his eyes. He felt how they untied his hands.
Then happened nothing for a while.

Nish had used a healing spell on the boy´s hands. Kiaro and Nish were just busy with a meal when they heard the noises from (noise coming out of) their tent. Kiaro felt bad because of this. He had seen the fear in the boy´s eyes. He looked at Nish who was busy whiping the last rests of (remaining) blood away.
“We´ll have to retie him (tie him again).”
Nish nodded.
”I´ll wrap some scarves around his wrists.”, Nish answered and left. Kiaro looked down at his captive. He wondered who he was and what would happen when he wakes (was going to wake) up.
Kiaro climbed off the boy and lay next to him, watching his face. He looked so damn sexy. Kiaro put the gag down and placed a kiss on the boy´s lips.
“So soft.”,
he said to himself and kissed him again, now forcing his tongue into his captive´s mouth, while he ran (running) his hands through the silky red hair. When he finished the kiss Kiaro couldn´t control himself. He opened his leather pants, pulled down his underwear and lay on top of the sleeping beauty. The silk of their captive´s pants felt so great on his hard manhood. Kiaro started rubbing himself against the boy. Kiaro kissed the boy again and then he climbed a bit up and dig (buried) his face in that silky hair, enjoying the nice scent and his throbbing manhood rubbing over the boy´s smooth skin.
Kiaro moaned and closed his eyes, then he came with a scream.
Sinking back onto the blankets, Kiaro kissed the boy once more, this time very gentle.
“Look what mess youmade ('ve done).”
Kiaro almost jumped when he heard Nish´s voice. His face turned red as he faced his friend.
“Oh ehm I...”
he started, but then he saw that hungry look in Nish´s violet eyes.
“Shut up!”,
was all Nish said when he pushed Kiaro down on the blanket. Kiaro grasped for air, when he suddenly felt a tongue on his cock.

Nish gently ran his tongue over his friend´s manhood, licking every remaining drop of his cum into his hungry mouth. After he finished cleaning Kiaro, he wrapped his lips around the already (once more) hardening cock and sucked him back into full erection. While this (In the meantime), he guided Kiaro´s hand to his leather crotch and let the blonde give a litte back of what he recived (had received). Nish enjoyed Kiaro´s moans of pleasure as he brought him to the edge of climax, then he simply let him go.
„That´s for raping our captive...without me.“,
Nish said and now turned around to the still sleeping boy and continued his licking on the boys well toned chest, removing every evidence of Kiaro´s little game.
While this (Meanwhile,) Kiaro stuffed his erection (erect member) back into his pants; he would get a chance later. Now he also focused on their slowly waking (awakening) captive. He sat back onto the boy´s chest and ran his hands through his hair and over his face. The boy groaned as Nish started to run his hands over his pants. After some seconds of massaging the captive´s crotch formed a large bulge under the silk.
Kiaro carefully placed his own bulge on the boy´s face, gently rubbing it on him. As the boy groaned again he was gagged by a leather clad crotch. Kiaro enjoyed some unwilling (unwanted) ball licking by (of) his captive, while Nish continued to caress the boy´s cock through his pants.
Kiaro moaned as the boy´s tongue probed that thing between his lips, the trying (and then tried) to push it out.
The boy opened his sexy green eyes and looked up to Kiaro, then down to what he was licking.
Ich hab die Fehler mal bei dir im Text korrigiert;
wenn du möchtest, kannst du die ja verbessern ;)
(Das sollte nur zu deiner Hilfe dienen und keine Art der Kritik sein.)
Zur Story: Das mit den Fantasy-Inhalten fand ich ganz lustig und hast auch oft alles
(-> Hintergrund, die Lappen zur Betäubung, Einleitung etc.) schön beschrieben;
zur "Aktion" der Charaktere kann ich mich aber leider nichts sagen, da ich nicht so der Yaoi-Fan bin...
Ansonsten fand ichs gut! :yo:
 

GaggedBoy

Gläubiger
soo, hier mal die Fortsetzung

He screamed...or at least tried to and threw his head away to get that thing off his mouth.
Kiaro quickly got off his captive and let himself fall next to him, handgagging him, before he could scream.
„Calm down, sweetie. That won´t hurt.“ He said.
The boy looked at him with big, scared eyes. Nish had stopped his stroking when their captive started to struggle, but now he grabbed the silken pants and pulled them down in a swift motion.
Their captive strted to jell in Kiaros hand and struggled like a madman. Kiaro just kept his hand firmly in place and placed his other hand on the boy´s chest to keep him down.
Nish sat on their victims legs and wrapped his hand around the large erection in front of him.
The boy moaned deeply and stopped struggling.
„Feels nice, hmm?“
Kiaro whispered in his ear and lightly kissed him on the cheek.
Devin couldn´t help but enjoy the skillful wanking of his cock. The elf knew exactly what he did and Devin could have come after two minutes, but his captor always stopped a second before and then worked on Devin´s balls for some time, before he returned his attention to the throbbing manhood.
The blonde still kept his hand pressed on Devins mouth, but his other one was now pinching Devins nipples, while kissing his neck.
Devin had never experienced something like this. Tied up and completely helpless he could not stop them and that turned him on. He was aroused like never before in his life and the cruel teasing of the dark haired elf feeded his need to come.
He didn´t know for how long they kept him on the edge of a climax, but it had to be an hour or even more. Devin already begged with his eyes for relief, as the blonde stopped his stroking and licking. For some time they just looked in each others eyes, then the elf smiled.
„That felt good I bet. But I know something better.“
He looked at his comrade and nodded. The dark haired alf grinned and suddenly took Devins cock into his mouth.
Devin graped for air, as his member diasapeared in the elfs mouth...or at least some part. The elf tried his best, but he couldn´t get more than half of it into his mouth, so he just decided to work on what he could reach and used his hands to stroke the rest.
Devin closed his eyes and just let himself fall into the waves of joy his captor send through his body.
As he felt himself close to the greatest climax in his life suddenly something strange happened. Something slipped into his mouth. Devin opened his eyes and faced the blod elfes crotch. Unnoticed he had removed his hands and stripped naked and now he had put his own member into Devins mouth. Normally Devin would have beend terrified, but after this long teasing he was too horny to refuse. He licked his kidnappers cock hungriely and it didn´t taste unpleaseant as expected. The other one slowed down his licking to keep Devin aroused, untill he finished the blonde. What he did. Devin didn´t have to work more than five minutes as the elf fired a load of hot and tasty cum into Devins waiting mouth. He swallowed all he could get. Five big loads of that tasty liquid just disappeard and never left Devins mouth. The blonde elf smiled and Devin liked this picture.
The blondes took his member out and laid next to Devin again, wrapped his arms around him and whispered a silent „Thank you“.
Devin couldn´t answer, because the other elf now licked him with passion and skill. And then the cum that had waited for so long stormed out.
Devin screamed loud and half rose from the bed as he fired load after load. The elf tried to swallow, but he just could not take it all. White semen ran down his chin and after the seventh load it just dropped out.
Devin fell back into the pillow, still cumming. The blonde stared at the scene and could´t belive how much the prince gave untill he finally finished.
„Wow.“ Was everything Kiaro could say. Nish was still busy licking every drop off he had missed.
The Kiaro decided it was the best time for some questions.
„Who are you?“ he asked the exhaused boy softly.
„Devin.“ Was the weak answer. Kiaro looked at his captive in surprise.
„The prince?“ he asked and the boy nodded.
Kiaro and Nish looked at each other. Now it was Nish who said „Wow“
„Where can we bring you back?“ Kiaro asked and his state Devin just answered.
„The castle of Lady Nasira.“
Kiaro nodded and looked at Nish.
„Then you´ll send them a ransom note.“
Nish looked angry. „Why don´t you go?“
„I´m gonna have a taste of him too. And you really got enough of him, didn´t you?“
Nish said something Kiaro didn´t understand and left the tent. Kiaro now looked down at Devin and smiled.
After some seconds he kissed the sleepy prince on the lips and forced his tongue into his mouth. As the prince kissed him back Kiaro felt a rush of excitement. He kissed the boy long and passionated and when he stopped he saw the prince´s cock already hard again. Kiaro had a closed look. The boy was well build. He was big, maybe one of the biggest he had seen yet and definetely the most beautiful. Nice formed and hard as a rock, with a drop of precum glistening on his head, inviting him to lick it off. The prince had opened his eyes again and looked up to Kiaro with dazed green eyes.
„Shall I lick him?“ Kiaro asked and ran his fingertip over the whole lenght of that nice cock.
„No, don´t...ugh stop th...aaaah.“
Kiaro just ignored the protests and licked that precum away. It tasted salty, but it was filled with an aroma that immedeatly made Kiaro hungry for more. But first he licked his way up and down the shaft. Devins protests had become a soft moaning. Kiaro carefully licked his captives balls and even took one in his mouth.
„Ohhh....please....please...“
The boy begged.
„Please what?“ Kiaro asked grining.
„Please....make...make me cum.“
Now the boy could no longer stop himself and Kiaro smiled. The prince looked so hot, tied up, with a raging boner and this lust filled eyes.
„How could I refuse?“
with that words Kiaro wrapped his lips around the princes cock head and then swallowed as much as he could get.
„OOOHH.“
The prince moaned loudly. Kiaro moved his head up and down, licking and sucking the soft skin of this precious manhood.
„Ooh god...son´t stop. Please...I´m cumming.“
Devin groaned in pleasure as he felt his next climax comming.
Kiaro sucked harder and was rewarded with a load of semen. Devin came, still much more than usually, but less than the first time. Kiaro filled his mouth and let go of the cock. But Devin wans´t finished yet and shot two more loads into Kiaros face. Kiaro didn´t care. He let the liquid run through his mouth and over his tongue, enjoying the aroma, untill he finally let it run through his throat. Then he whiped the rest of his face and licked it from his fingers.
Pleased he looked at the prince, who had already fallen asleep. For a moment he just watched the slumbering boy, then he snuggled to him, got the blanket and also went to sleep, his face buried in Devins red hair.
 

Ediore666

Novize
Als erstes mal GaggedBoy - wow.Ich bin wirklich SEHR beeintruckt.Mir gefällt dein schreibstil sehr.Nicht zu aggresiv aber auch nicht zu "weich" geschrieben.Postest du noch mehr hier rein?Wenn ja,würde mich das sehr freuen.Den ich bin schon gespannt wie es weiter geht.Natürlich hast du hier und da ein paar Fehler gemacht,aber das ist ja ok.Wir sind ja schließlich unter uns,und no ones perfect ;).
 
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