I haven't play the game yet and I definitely won't in this state. :/
Please, take this as my advise for you how to make it more popular and avoid a lot of problems later:
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At first, ask somebody else to create the character models for you.
I can see you are using some kind of latest Illusion character maker, which is probably the best considering the quality, availability and usability for sex acts.
But there are also two big problems with this engine:
1) Creating nice faces are incredibly hard. It requires a lot of talent, which almost nobody have.
2) Creating non-asian faces are also almost impossible if you care.
So, looking at your characters, THEY ARE SERIOUSLY UGLY.
They turn me down so much, I won't ever play your game, if they would look like that. And I'm definitely not the only one who thinks so.
Here are some characters you can use. I advise you to find some good ones, copy them and then edit only their body to fit your tastes (but remember that not all good faces match changed body):
Illusion Game Cards
Sexy Beach Premium Resort character database
Hongfire – Sexy Beach Premium Resort Characters Upload Thread
Hongfire – HoneySelect Character Upload Thread
Hongfire – PlayHome Character Sharing Thread
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The second thing is that I would like to warn you, that Patreon is meant for making money, so you just can't use everything there.
Ideally, you should have official permission from
Illusion Company to use their engine for your game. However, negotiating with Japanese is always difficult, so it is really easier just hope they will never find it out and if they do, they just wouldn't care.
But in this case, you just MUSN'T have illegal copy of their engine!!!
If you don't really own the game, you are violating a lot more laws and you can be sued really harsh for it, so if you really want to work on your game, you should buy the original disk on
Getchu or somewhere.
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I wish you a good luck!